Working through the 227 Rules For Monks. Who knew the simple life could be so complex. This another of the 92 pācittiyas.
True Love
she shows me
the new backpack
that her boyfriend had bought her
for her sixtieth birthday
he was so pleased with the colour
her favourite green
she hates it
but she didn’t tell him that
it’s not the right fit
on her shoulders
like the wonderful red parka
he bought her for Christmas
she loves the colour
but the zipper doesn’t work easily
she has to zip a little
before putting it on
I guess he’s from India
as she imitates his accent
I like so much to give you things
she’s grateful to receive his gifts
but will insist
that in future she go with him
when he’s going to buy
a surprise for her
she asks me
if that sounds reasonable
I’m not sure
why she’s asking me
of if she’s showing off
that she has a boyfriend
who buys her things
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I enjoyed the storytelling and simple symbolism. This made me realize that I don’t necessarily need to use big words or long stanzas to make a great poem. I love how it’s merely describing an everyday occurrence and how it pertains to how women interact with gay men. At least that’s what I got out of it. Thank you for sharing! Can I reblog this?
yes to reblog
Yay! Thank you, kind sir. 😙
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Hello to my truly lovely angels! I enjoyed the storytelling and simple symbolism. This made me realize that I don’t necessarily need to use big words or long stanzas to make a great poem. I love how it’s merely describing an everyday occurrence and how it pertains to how women interact with gay men. At least that’s what I got out of it. Well, enjoy! And please check out Duncan’s blog while you’re here!